Don't Want to Miss
Oh God,
I am a parrot.
I have a mother,
And, a father,
And, a sister too,
Who are very dear to me.
I don't want to miss them.
They don't want to miss me.
So, find a way to save us.
We will live happily ever after.
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D.Pranav Reddy,
6th class.Gomathy Global School.
Nandivardhanam (Juniors)
Ist Best Poem , Prabhava pillala panduga,.29-10-10
15 comments:
Hai Pranav,, an excellent delivery.. chaalaa baagaa vraasaavu.. keep it up..feed birds around u with a few grains.. U will enjoy a lot... SMILE.........
Do everything you can
To keep The Family Together,
Forever...
Shridevi
Congrats to Pranav... Parrot voice is so sweet.. and thoughtful.
Congrats Pranav..
Poem is nice. Thoutful. keep it up.
Congrats Pranav. Poem is very nice. And thoughtful.
very thoughtful Pranav....continue writing... :)
congrats to pranav!
Thank you everyone.
This is my first prize winning poem. I am very glad you all liked it.
I will continue to write stories.You please keep reading. And,advise me to write better.
I LIKE TO BE A CHILD FOREVER !
Happy Children's Day.
Pranav
It's a good poem.
The person who reads this poem should help animals and birds like parrot.
Happy Children's Day !
S.Meghana
It's a good poem.
The person who reads this poem should help animals and birds like parrot.
Happy Children's Day !
S.Meghana
Dear Pranav,
God should really help your parrot.
We should try our level best to save the parrot and it's family.
Best wishes for all children.
IV Pranav Reddy
Dear Pranav,
I like your poem.I want to read it again and again.
I feed birds.I have a bird friend ,a sparrow.It stays at my home. I made a bird house for it.I call it chinnu. My mom calls me chinnu.So, I gave my name to my friend, sparrow.It's brown and cute.
I love chinnu a lot.
Happy Children's Day.
S.Pranavi ,3rd Class.
Dear Pranav,
Congratulations.
I like your poem.
Do you have a parrot?
Enjoy your freedom.
I Sai Varshita, 7 th class.
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