The First Prize winning story written by D.Prateeka Reddy , 3rd Class, in Pillalaku Je Je * Pillala panDuga at Prabhava in the category , mudda banthi ( Sub- Juniors).
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With a Thud !
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Once upon a time, a Cave Man came to Nellore .
And, suddenly a Rock Star came and landed in the same place.
Both , the Cave Man and the Rock Star , looked face to face.
I was watching it.
Both of them talked in Telugu for few minutes and then, they quarrelled.
The Cave Man didn’t know that the Rock Star is a rock star.
He thought, the Rock Star was also a Cave Man like him.
And, the Rock Star thought that the Cave Man was also a Rock Star . Because he looked just like him.
All of a sudden, the Cave Man became mad . He took an iron rod and hit the Rock Star.
The Rock Star fell on the ground. After a minute, the Rock Star got up . He took another iron rod and hit the Cave Man.
He hit the Cave Man so hard that the Cave Man’s head broke into two.
It’s miracle that the two pieces of the head got fixed again, with in a minute !
The Rock Star took a sword ,at the same time, the Cave Man took a sword .
Both of them started to fight.
It was a very serious fight.
I was eager to know who was going to win?
But, suddenly I got a doubt ,
‘These two people were very friendly in the beginning but, I don’t know why they are fighting now! ‘
I left that .
Everyone were shouting.
Some for the Cave Man and some for the Rock Star.
I too shouted.
“Rock Star ! Rock Star !”
And, at last, the Rock Star won.
I felt very happy.
Each one who shouted for the RockStar got a very very big and surprising gift.
I went two times in the que. So, I got two gifts.
By that time, the party held at our school had completed.
I felt sad for a moment .
After that , I felt happy that I got two gifts.
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D.Prateeka Reddy,3rd class.
29-10-2010,Prabhava , Story Writing Competetion.
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Edited Version
Editor :Narayanaswamy,kottapaali,
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Once upon a time, a Cave Man came to Nellore .And, suddenly a Rock Star came and landed in the same place.
Both the Cave Man and the Rock Star stood face to face
I was watching them.
Both of them talked in Telugu for a few minutes and then, they quarrelled.
The cave man didn’t know that the Rock Star was a rock star.
He thought that, the Rock Star was also a Cave Man like him.
And, the Rock Star thought that the Cave Man was also a Rock Star ,because he looked just like him.
All of the sudden, the Cave Man became mad . He took an iron rod and hit hte Rock Star.
The Rock Star fell on the ground. After a minute, the Rock Star got up . He took another iron rod and hit the Cave Man.
He hit the Cave Man so hard that the Cave Man’s head broke into two.
It’s miracle that the two pieces of the head got fixed again, with in a minute !
The Rock Star took a sword ,at the same time, the Cave Man took a sword . Both of them started to fight.
It was a very serious fight.
I was eager to know who was going to win?
But, suddenly I got a doubt ,
‘These two people were very friendly in the beginning but, I don’t know why they are fighting now! ‘
I stopped thinking about that.
Everyone was shouting.
Some for the Cave Man and some for the Rock Star.
I too shouted.
“Rock Star ! Rock Star !”
And, at last, the Rock Star won.
I felt very happy.
Each person whoshouted for the RockStar got a very very big and surprising gift.
I went twice in the queue So, I got two gifts.
By that the party held at our school had completed.
I felt sad for a moment .
After that ,I felt happy that I got two gifts.
